Wednesday, 5 August 2015

The Drenched Day

The Drenched Day 
Yesterday when I was walking home, it drenched
 down with rain there was a huge storm. I ran inside. 
I was so scared, we gathered in the lounge, the power
 went out. Then we all woke up it was the morning. We all
 got ready. I went to school and then... The forest I walked
 through was blocked I had to go the long way! I got to school.
 First we had to get into sports gear to do cross-country practice
 before it got to bad. Everyone ran through the 
drenched field as quick as they could to get out of the
 mud puddles. Just then a tree fell onto the course and everyone
 started to panic. It nearly fell on Elliot he screamed like a girl!
 And we finished the course a lap early that day was getting worse just then...
The weather destroyed room two everyone screamed.
And guess what happened next!

A Paragraph Of A Narrative
By Bradley.B

1 comment:

  1. What happened next?! Good gracious I hope they are all ok! Very descriptive paragraph my love :-)

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